Thursday, April 8, 2010

Thesis Statement

Teen fatalities in automobile accidents have risen to an alarming rate. This is very tragic but preventable by altering the drivers education course to be more in-car related and extending the amount of time to have a learners permit.
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6 comments:

  1. SarahApril 8, 2010 at 1:32 PM

    interesting topic. I like how you simply didnt say, change the age. great solution! :)

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  2. Cwtts23April 8, 2010 at 1:36 PM

    providing teens with a more hands on experience will def reduce automobile acceidents

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  3. Jennifer CApril 8, 2010 at 9:04 PM

    There are to many teens out in the world today that act like they have been driving for years! Your solution sounds like a great idea! Teens need to be more prepared when it comes to driving. I defiantly think they should extend the time length for permits!

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  4. Doomsday Emergency PreparednessApril 12, 2010 at 9:12 PM

    Very true jen. More in car driving and even simulation driving, would be a good way to help teens drive better and to live through their teens. haha

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  5. TroyVonte' BApril 13, 2010 at 10:50 AM

    Well, For Me Who Was Efected By These Changes That You Want, I Disagree Only To Your Solutions. Because 9Months To Keep Your Learners Is Long Enough, At 1st It Was 6Months And Then 2Weeks Before I Could Get My License, They Added 3 More Months. And The Drivers Ed Courses Varies From Class To Class, And State To State. But I Do Agree With The Overall Topic.

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  6. Diane BinnsJuly 21, 2013 at 11:46 PM

    Yeah! That would certainly be an interesting topic. Did you stick with it? Well I think thesis statement should be strong so that it would be a thesis help that can also make the whole paper to stand and be challenge to whoever read it.

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